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1-16-2023

And we're back to music fucking.

Edda's right hand in the first panel is really good, I'm glad he drew her fingers. Amos' right hand is a mitten and her hand cupping his face/closing around his throat in the final panel is also basically a mitten. He CAN draw hands, he can even draw them in the correct proportion, but he usually focuses on other things.

Edda's movement from the first panel to the second is well done, too. There's a great sense of motion.

However if you're going to prominently feature breasts with ample cleavage you should perhaps practice a bit. They don't look like weird inflamed pectoral muscles but they still don't look right.

It feels like there's been a shift and McEldowney is suddenly letting loose with a flood of sexy stuff. He's not just focusing on legs (and knees). Now he's got butts, boobs, and feet in the mix. He doesn't have the skill earned by decades of practice in depicting them, they're obviously not as well loved and well rendered as legs legs legs, but it's there.

Anyway, maybe we'll find out what Edda meant about "do you want a sister/brother/sister and brother/brother and sister/two sisters/two brothers/cat and dog/bicycle built for two/small litter/etc." by this time next year. At least Xiulan's pregnancy has progressed, we know (?) time is passing (??).

I really don't know if these two have gotten dressed up to work out their concert fucking kink at home or if they're on stage doing their performance art thing. She bangs on the piano keys discordantly, he plucks a single note, they start humping.That's what they're doing right? That has to be what they're doing. It's "sexy" performance art for people with a very specific set of tastes.